As Connor & Blake follow the mysterious person into the galaxies snow planet and we can see the bright snow coloured moon.
Suddenly Blake fall through the soft elegant ice so Connor had to jump into help him Connor Brock the ice and pulled Blake to safety. “Are you alright” “how did it happen” yes i am alright just freezing.”
This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.
- D = describe the setting
- A = use action
- S = use speech
- H = describe how the character is feeling
- ? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical question
We wrote collaboratively and used a writing frame for this learning task, then we wrote our own paragraphs today
